Block
Structure
Introduction
to introduce the topic and
outline the situation
Main Body (Part 1)
to identify the
causes
(one paragraph for each reason if elaborated
in detail)
Transitional paragraph/sentence
Main Body (Part 2):
to explain the
effects
(one paragraph for each effect if
elaborated in detail)
Conclusion
to sum up key points and ideas
Point-by-point
Structure
Introduction
to introduce the topic and
outline the situation
Main Body (Part 1)
to identify the first
cause and explain its effect(s)
Main Body (Part 2)
to identify the second
cause and explain its effect(s)
Main Body
more parts for additional causes
and effects
Conclusion
to sum up key points and ideas
Text A
[1] Technology in food production is advanced in
today’s society. However, hunger is still a major problem in
many countries. For those who live in an affluent society,
'hunger’ may just mean a desire to eat for pleasure.
However, for those living in poverty in some parts of the
world, hunger is a real life-threatening issue.
[2] Hunger is never an isolated problem. It is the
consequence of a combination of problems. First of all, the
root of hunger is the uneven distribution of food among
different income groups. According to the Food and
Agriculture Organisation (FAO) (2000), over 50% of the
world’s seafood and meat is consumed by the richest 20% of
the world population while the poorest 20% consume only 5%
of such protein-rich food. Inadequate intake of protein does
not only cause hunger but also other health problems, such
as marasmus and kwashiorkor. More importantly, as protein is
essential for the growth and maintenance of muscles and
bones, deficiency in protein can lead to delayed or even
stunted growth in children.
[3] In addition, natural disasters and wars are
common contributing factors to large-scale hunger. Prolonged
wars and natural disasters like typhoons, floods and
droughts often lead to ruined farmland and disrupted
agricultural activities. Destroyed roads and tunnels also
cause interrupted transportation of food. Consequently, food
production is significantly reduced and the transportation
of food is hampered. All these worsen the problem of hunger.
[4] Environmental pollution is another reason for
hunger. Waste from unregulated industrial activities can
pollute farmland and rivers. Excessive exhaust fumes from
vehicles and factories result in polluted air and
environment. The increasing emission of carbon dioxide into
the atmosphere contributes to global warming, making the
climate less favourable for the growth of crops. A likely
result of the reduced amount of food production is a rise in
food prices. When food, especially staple food like rice,
wheat and potatoes, becomes unaffordable to people, hunger
arises.
[5] In summary, hunger stems from both natural
disasters and human-induced problems. No matter what the
causes are, it is clear that hunger can have serious effects
on people, especially children. To put an end to hunger,
concerted efforts should be made by all countries to ensure
a reduction in environmental pollution, a more even
distribution of food and international peace.
Text B
[1] The First World War was the first global war ever
fought in the history of mankind. More than thirty nations
in Asia, Africa, America and Europe were involved in the
warfare. The remarkably large scale of the War also rendered
its impact extensive and far-reaching. Some of the causes
and effects of the War will be examined in this essay.
[2] The emergence of extreme nationalism in Europe
was one of the main causes leading to WWI because it called
for absolute loyalty to one’s country and gave rise to
foreign expansion. The desire to expand the influence of the
German Empire and the Austro-Hungarian Empire was a case in
point. In addition, conflicts among the European powers were
frequent when they competed for colonies which could provide
them with raw materials and new markets for their goods.
Owing to the fierce arms race and the adversarial nature of
the two alliances formed, the tension among the powers was
further intensified. A large-scale war was an inevitable
corollary when countries were reluctant to negotiate and
compromise to resolve conflicts.
[3] The unprecedented scale of WWI brought about
significant and extensive impacts in many aspects. Firstly,
the fierce fighting among the participating countries and
frequent bombing of cities resulted in casualties of around
8.5 million soldiers and 13 million civilians. Secondly, the
War weakened some European powers, such as the
Austro-Hungarian Empire and the Ottoman Empire, to such an
extent that their empires collapsed. Some territories were
also divided among the winning powers after the War and the
map of Europe was, therefore, redrawn. Thirdly, the mass
movement of civilians and soldiers across countries during
the War triggered off a rapid spread of the Spanish flu,
which was the deadliest pandemic in history. Despite the
destructive consequences, a positive backwash of the War was
the advancement in women’s rights. Women alleviated the
labour shortage created by conscription during the War and
they proved their contributions in the agricultural and
industrial sectors. As a result of the higher social status,
there was a strong demand for women’s suffrage, which
finally led to the enfranchisement of women in some European
countries.
[4] In short, the outbreak of WWI can be attributed
to a number of factors. Given its unprecedented scale, the
War brought about far-reaching and devastating impacts in
many aspects. Some of the unresolved conflicts and the
aftermath of the War became the causes of the Second World
War, which began in 1939.