Block
Structure
Introduction
to introduce the topic and
outline the situation
Main Body (Part 1)
to focus on the first
subject of comparison
Main Body (Part 2)*:
to focus on the second
subject of comparison
Main Body (Part 3)*:
to focus on the last
subject of comparison
Conclusion
to sum up key points and ideas
*Notes: In the
paragraph, comparisons and contrasts can be made
between the subject in focus and that/those of the
previous paragraph(s).
Point-by-point
Structure
Introduction
to introduce the topic and
outline the situation
Main Body (Part 1)
to compare and contrast
the items to be discussed using the first criterion
Main Body (Part 2)
to compare and contrast
the items to be discussed using the second criterion
Main Body (Part 3)
to compare and contrast
the items to be discussed using the third criterion
Conclusion
to sum up key points and ideas
Text A
[1] Mammals, reptiles and amphibians are all
vertebrates and share some similarities. A case in
point is that they produce offspring through the union
of a male sperm and a female egg. In spite of the
similarity in the method of reproduction, these
vertebrates have their distinctive features in other
aspects. This essay will shed light on their
similarities and defining features and differences.
[2] Mammals have live births and are delivered
from the mother’s womb. They are warm-blooded animals,
which means their body temperature does not change
much according to the surroundings. Hair is a defining
feature of mammals. It helps insulate mammals by
trapping air. With a pair of lungs, mammals are able
to inhale oxygen and exhale carbon dioxide.
[3] Unlike mammals, most reptiles are born from
eggs. Another difference between reptiles and mammals
is that most reptiles are cold-blooded, which means
their body temperature varies depending on the
surroundings. As reptiles do not maintain a constant
body temperature like mammals do, they tend to live in
warm places and stay in shade. In addition, reptiles
do not have hair on their body. They have scales
instead. However, both mammals and reptiles breathe
with lungs.
[4] Amphibians are animals that can live on
land and in water. Similar to reptiles, amphibians are
cold-blooded and mostly born from eggs. In spite of
these common features, one way to differentiate
between the two is how their body is covered. Reptiles
are covered in scales, whereas most amphibians have
moist skin. Another distinctive feature of amphibians
is their metamorphosis. Amphibians are born with a
tail, breathe with gills and live in water when they
are young. However, most of them will develop limbs
and can live on land in their adult life. On the
contrary, neither reptiles nor mammals undergo a
dramatic change of form or shape from juvenile to
adulthood. Another noteworthy difference is that in
addition to breathing with lungs like mammals and
reptiles, most adult amphibians can also breathe
through skin.
[5] In short, despite all being vertebrates,
mammals, reptiles and amphibians have some distinctive
features that help to differentiate them from one
another.
Text B
[1] The use of electric cars has been widely
promoted around the globe in recent years as they are
believed to be more environmentally friendly than
petrol cars. Many drivers start to consider electric
vehicles a viable alternative to petrol cars. The
following essay seeks to compare electric cars and
petrol cars in terms of convenience, impacts on the
environment and the costs of ownership and maintenance
to help drivers make informed decisions.
[2] Petrol cars may outcompete electric cars in
terms of convenience. While drivers of petrol cars can
simply fuel their vehicles in any petrol filling
station when necessary, accurate estimation and
advance planning on the time and locations of charging
is required for drivers of electric cars to avoid
interruptions to their journeys. As the charging
process may take several hours, electric cars are also
found to have a shorter operating range in comparison
with petrol cars.
[3] Despite being less convenient and
driver-friendly, electric cars outperform petrol cars
in terms of environmental friendliness. Petrol-fuelled
vehicles are one of the main culprits for air
pollution as carbon dioxide, a greenhouse gas, is
produced when fossil fuels are burnt. Electric
vehicles, in contrast, have virtually no exhaust
emissions. Although some may argue that air pollution
is caused too when electricity is generated in power
plants to charge electric cars, studies show that the
greenhouse gas emitted can be as low as only one third
of that from petrol cars. Therefore, electric cars are
considered more environmentally friendly than petrol
cars overall.
[4] As for the costs of ownership and
maintenance, petrol cars used to have a competitive
advantage over electric cars when the technology
required for producing the battery of electric cars
was expensive. Nevertheless, with the advancement in
technology, the production cost of electric cars has
now been lowered. Further, governments worldwide are
keen to provide incentives such as tax remission,
grants and subsidies for owners of electric cars.
Drivers of petrol cars, conversely, do not get to
enjoy these benefits. All these help to close the gap
and it is expected that in the near future, the costs
of purchasing and maintaining electric cars may be
similar to those of petrol cars.
[5] In conclusion, both electric cars and
petrol cars have their own advantages and
disadvantages. Drivers should weigh up the pros and
cons when deciding which type is more suitable for
them.